Ah... I had gained a stomach ache and lost my courage, gripping onto the rope.. Peeking down to what looked like a deep dark feeding pool. I swung my head backwards and smiled as if everything was normal. “ Tangi, my favourite brother, you go first!” I spat out nervously. Of course he shook his head with the building up excuses of phones getting wet, blah blaah blah, “Yeah whatever” I mumbled. Suddenly butterflies - millions, and millions of butterflies - were swirling around in my body making it impossible to think straight. Not to mention the wide ranging autumn leaves hid the sun causing the creek to transform into a gloomy tar pool.
I stepped backwards, hesitantly of course, forced my eyes shut and leaped off the cliff . Well I thought I did buuutt.. Maybe my legs weren't ready to make a bigger step in life, I opened my eyes one at a time glanced around and sighed. “ Just jump Chloe'' Erika was getting frustrated, “ Are you serious? We've been waiting for you for so long” added Tangi. “ Ok, ok i'll really do it this time’’ I yelled. This time I felt something different, courage, excitement and rebeliation. “ THREE TWO ONE!” Erika and Tangi hyped me up. Off I swung but the height was not what i expected; out came a - blood curdling - SCREAM. My head was spinning, hands were slipping off the rope and... SPLOOSH!
My brain froze as if I had just gulped 3 mouthfuls of a frozen coke in one go. Looking around for vicious creatures but also not trying to focus on my body turning into a 5ft icicle. Sharking around inspecting every piece of driftwood, boring old stick or leaf I pass; I may find something extraordinary I thought. But yet again I did not.
I broke the water tension as I bubbled up from beneath the water, looking to my left and seeing Tangi and Erika pecking at each other's lips; they were acting like chickens vacuuming up their chook food.
“ Get a room you two “ I shouted across the water, shivering with lips the color of a sea blue lipstick.
Oooooo reading this makes me miss teaching Year 7 and 8 students as I was really gripped. At first I thought the story was going to end badly with a death from your fall but liked the adrenaline rush that you described. I could relate to when I did a bungy jump in Queenstown years ago! You could go into even more detail to describe your feelings and the rush of excitement because you had me engaged and excited. Great writing Chloe!
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